Crazy, mad and lost

Today
I missed my train
In a split second
The head rush
Made me bent down and I gasped
Instead of a "kick in the air" and "oh my shit”
I smiled and tapped on my head
Am I crazy?

I answer " Yes honey"
To my manager's call
I look up and admire street lamps
Like they are xmas's fall
Am I lost?

I mess up things and blush!
A hand on my mouth
And a smile so silly
I keep counting them
To narrate, for they seem so funny!
Am I mad?

I am...
Lost in your thoughts,
Crazy in love, and
Mad about you.

I keep writing about all of them
So while waiting, I can hum
These songs, that lingers
On your eyes and lips
Until the time, mine meet yours’

Comments

G3 said…
me the firstae :))))
G3 said…
//I am...
Lost in your thoughts,
Crazy in love, and
Mad about you.//

Kelviyum naanae badhilum naanae type-o ;))))

Irundhalum poem superu :))))
Thamizhmaangani said…
me the 2nd!
eyomer said…
is it for Natalie? shez in love? yea.. I remember the previous poem. she has to ensure her so-and-so is also in love. is she sure about it?

anyways my wishes to her. and u write well.
Savitha said…
Nice poem and well written...
Prats said…
Great one!!!
Red Phoenix said…
First time into love pola theriyidhae... :P
You write very well in English!!!
keep writing in Tamil too!!!!
eyomer said…
hey... read your poem again. so many questions.

** I missed my train **
not to miss him in thoughts, right? ;)

** Instead of a "kick in the air" and "oh my shit”
I smiled and tapped on my head
Am I crazy? **

love is crazy. cant help it.

** I answer " Yes honey"
To my manager's call **

wrong signal to wrong people :P
but right signal from heart :)

** I look up and admire street lamps
Like they are xmas's fall
Am I lost? **

yea. lost in his love. no escape.

** Am I mad? **

yea surely mad about a mad guy

** I am...
Lost in your thoughts,
Crazy in love, and
Mad about you. **

Well... you composed it at the end...

** On your eyes and lips
Until the time, mine meet yours **

wow. this is so romantic. eyes to eyes and lips to lips. feeling heavenly. :)
Srivats said…
@ G3

Thanks :)

@ Thamiz
Yes 2nd prize ungalukku dhaan LOL

@Savitha
Welcome! thanks for ur words!

@Prats
Thanks thanks !

@Red pheonix
LOL not really :) thanks for coming , long time no see ;)

@Aruna
Bayangara damage! sari englishley ezhdhu , thamiz kindal pannadennu solreenga, sari dhan!
Srivats said…
@ Eyomer

//
is it for Natalie? shez in love? yea//

Nope this is for me , just a poem no strings attached LOL

//wow. this is so romantic. eyes to eyes and lips to lips. feeling heavenly. :)
//
Thanks for all the kind words but as I said its just fictionaly :P

Please stick around.
//I am...
Lost in your thoughts,
Crazy in love, and
Mad about you.

I keep writing about all of them
So while waiting, I can hum
These songs, that lingers//

good song . short and sweet. And love makes you crazy enough to admire such small things and makes you a poet. I wonder the moment you meet your love we could have much more poems to enjoy.... Cheers. The time starts to make it happen soon
Srivats said…
@ Paarthen rasithen

//I wonder the moment you meet your love we could have much more poems to enjoy.... Cheers. The time starts to make it happen soon
//

So glad to read ur comments, LOL I wish that happens :P Engey erukkangannu address kudutheenganna nalla erukkum ;)

Thanks for ur kind words!
Preeti Shenoy said…
LOVED the last two lines! :)
Am certain she will love it too :)
This IS love :)
Cheers
preeti
Srivats said…
@Preeti

Thanks :)
I hope so LOL
gils said…
avvvvvvvvvvvv..inga irukarachay nalla iruntha pulla..ipo ipdi aaidichay !!!
Anonymous said…
this is worst than my biochemistry text book..onnume puriyala
Anonymous said…
real name la ellam comment poda mudiyathu :D ithu naannu ellarukume theriyum so ethuku peru ellam potta comments?
Preethe said…
Hey Sri!!
totally smitten pola irukke!!!
Srivats said…
@ Preethe LOL
gils said…
unknownblogger...ithu yaarunu enaku teriumay :D
Zanychild said…
love is crazy, mad, lost, confused and all that I can think of.

Nice poem, reminded me of the days I used to write poems like crazy..ippo touchu vitupochu! :(
Srivats said…
@ Zancy child

amaanga unmay dhaan :P
Ezhudhunga kandippa varum :)

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