Crazy, mad and lost

Today
I missed my train
In a split second
The head rush
Made me bent down and I gasped
Instead of a "kick in the air" and "oh my shit”
I smiled and tapped on my head
Am I crazy?

I answer " Yes honey"
To my manager's call
I look up and admire street lamps
Like they are xmas's fall
Am I lost?

I mess up things and blush!
A hand on my mouth
And a smile so silly
I keep counting them
To narrate, for they seem so funny!
Am I mad?

I am...
Lost in your thoughts,
Crazy in love, and
Mad about you.

I keep writing about all of them
So while waiting, I can hum
These songs, that lingers
On your eyes and lips
Until the time, mine meet yours’

Comments

G3 said…
me the firstae :))))
G3 said…
//I am...
Lost in your thoughts,
Crazy in love, and
Mad about you.//

Kelviyum naanae badhilum naanae type-o ;))))

Irundhalum poem superu :))))
Thamizhmaangani said…
me the 2nd!
eyomer said…
is it for Natalie? shez in love? yea.. I remember the previous poem. she has to ensure her so-and-so is also in love. is she sure about it?

anyways my wishes to her. and u write well.
Savitha said…
Nice poem and well written...
Prats said…
Great one!!!
Red Phoenix said…
First time into love pola theriyidhae... :P
You write very well in English!!!
keep writing in Tamil too!!!!
eyomer said…
hey... read your poem again. so many questions.

** I missed my train **
not to miss him in thoughts, right? ;)

** Instead of a "kick in the air" and "oh my shit”
I smiled and tapped on my head
Am I crazy? **

love is crazy. cant help it.

** I answer " Yes honey"
To my manager's call **

wrong signal to wrong people :P
but right signal from heart :)

** I look up and admire street lamps
Like they are xmas's fall
Am I lost? **

yea. lost in his love. no escape.

** Am I mad? **

yea surely mad about a mad guy

** I am...
Lost in your thoughts,
Crazy in love, and
Mad about you. **

Well... you composed it at the end...

** On your eyes and lips
Until the time, mine meet yours **

wow. this is so romantic. eyes to eyes and lips to lips. feeling heavenly. :)
Srivats said…
@ G3

Thanks :)

@ Thamiz
Yes 2nd prize ungalukku dhaan LOL

@Savitha
Welcome! thanks for ur words!

@Prats
Thanks thanks !

@Red pheonix
LOL not really :) thanks for coming , long time no see ;)

@Aruna
Bayangara damage! sari englishley ezhdhu , thamiz kindal pannadennu solreenga, sari dhan!
Srivats said…
@ Eyomer

//
is it for Natalie? shez in love? yea//

Nope this is for me , just a poem no strings attached LOL

//wow. this is so romantic. eyes to eyes and lips to lips. feeling heavenly. :)
//
Thanks for all the kind words but as I said its just fictionaly :P

Please stick around.
//I am...
Lost in your thoughts,
Crazy in love, and
Mad about you.

I keep writing about all of them
So while waiting, I can hum
These songs, that lingers//

good song . short and sweet. And love makes you crazy enough to admire such small things and makes you a poet. I wonder the moment you meet your love we could have much more poems to enjoy.... Cheers. The time starts to make it happen soon
Srivats said…
@ Paarthen rasithen

//I wonder the moment you meet your love we could have much more poems to enjoy.... Cheers. The time starts to make it happen soon
//

So glad to read ur comments, LOL I wish that happens :P Engey erukkangannu address kudutheenganna nalla erukkum ;)

Thanks for ur kind words!
Preeti Shenoy said…
LOVED the last two lines! :)
Am certain she will love it too :)
This IS love :)
Cheers
preeti
Srivats said…
@Preeti

Thanks :)
I hope so LOL
gils said…
avvvvvvvvvvvv..inga irukarachay nalla iruntha pulla..ipo ipdi aaidichay !!!
this is worst than my biochemistry text book..onnume puriyala
real name la ellam comment poda mudiyathu :D ithu naannu ellarukume theriyum so ethuku peru ellam potta comments?
Preethe said…
Hey Sri!!
totally smitten pola irukke!!!
Srivats said…
@ Preethe LOL
gils said…
unknownblogger...ithu yaarunu enaku teriumay :D
Zanychild said…
love is crazy, mad, lost, confused and all that I can think of.

Nice poem, reminded me of the days I used to write poems like crazy..ippo touchu vitupochu! :(
Srivats said…
@ Zancy child

amaanga unmay dhaan :P
Ezhudhunga kandippa varum :)

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